By request: a passionate continuation of Perhaps …
It Seems
Lost in a land where embers never die
I cannot be satiated with need of you
Unquenchable, my thirst.
It seems
when I think on things, I cannot think
I cannot speak, I cannot
do naught
but experience
sensation after sensation.
You
do this to me
it seems,
and I
am filled
with deliciousness,
a wanton desire that women feel.
It seems, my body is yours
it seems, my longing grows
it seems, you know my needs
it seems, you know me so
and I am lost to desire
with my need for you.
It seems
a pleasurable torment!
Satisfy me
please
!
This reminds me of one of my earlier scripts and I will add it on my Space before I leave so that you may see why I thought of it. Yours is deliciousness of course and so well written ๐
Andro xx
Never ask for someone to satisfy you. Only you can attain personal gratification.
Very wise words Alejandro! And true ones too.
Lovely part 2, I can’t wait for part 3, it is so sensual, sexy and wanting!
Thanks Ute! ๐
OMG! ‘satisfy me please’ what a liner. ๐ I just love these words, Penny. Intensely sensual poem full of powerful passion
Thank you Celestine. I’m blushing, and I promised an online blogging friend a third one too, (Yikes!) ๐ xx
very good Penny very sexy
Yes, a bit, wasn’t it, Doris, in a hopefully more playful (writing the words) sort of way! ๐
Your words go deep into the psyche. You have a wonderful week.
Thank you very much, and you also, the very best and relaxing weekend you can have!
Intense and a fascinating glimpse into ‘that sort of thing’. I love your words and your perspectives and your shoes also.
Thank you, gratifying to know. Inside each human being on the planet (without exception) is a sensual nature whether they show it or not, it’s there! Sometimes it’s a nice thing for readers to have a vicarious perspective giving them their own personal reflective thoughts about this subject! Hows that for being analytical! lol
You are always that! I must admit that I never perceive anyone in this manner so for me this is an eye opener. It’s all a bit heated and overwhelming.
ummm… that’s the point!
Yay for my instincts. Posts like this always make me wonder how other people truly feel. If only I could perceive that I reckon I’d be on the path to some sort of enlightenment.
ha,ha,ha!
This feels so good … And ,,, I am really enjoying it … !!!Thanks for sharing!!!
Thank you so much, for reading and enjoying. I’ve had another request to follow this one up, so I’m thinking about it! ๐
Ooooooh … No one can please me more then … Thank you so much … ๐ …
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Thanks again .. Penny …
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Mmmmmm…..oh so very erotic in a very easy subtle way…
Thank you Jueseppi! xx
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Thank your for the reblog Jueseppi! ๐ xx
As always, my pleasure.
Ohhhhhhh MY. Seems a man cannot be quenched….without the right woman….
This was magnificent Ms. Penny.
You’re most welcome my friend! ๐ xx
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LOVE this — so happy you did the sequel too ๐ ~ This muse of yours is insatiable IT SEEMS!!! I Love her too ๐ ~ Outstanding write my dearest friend — I am in awe of you! x Robyn
I believe your correct Robyn, about my muse anyway or so it seems, lol! Much love, dearest friend! ๐ xo
oh…the “it seems” qualifier makes this post sooOOoo…revelatory…you know? And sensuous? yesss!!! very sexy, Penny, and wow! A new configuration to the kaleidoscope view of Penny. ๐
I like being a ‘new configuration to the kaleidoscope view’ of me. My first memory as a child (2 or 3) was the gift of a kaleidoscope. I’d put my eye up to it and get lost inside the myriad of ever changing prisms and shapes of color! Thank you a glorious compliment! ๐
frankly magnificent! I feel your sensations in this writing ๐
Thank you Gys. That was what I had hoped to convey, my friend. We all feel and long for these feelings, If we didn’t we’d be less than human, I think! ๐
Oh my – Feelin’ hot in here!
And – I know it’s not a hormonal hot-flash ๐
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Of course it isn’t hormonal (well yes it is – but not hot-flash related, well wait maybe …) Thank’s RoSy! ๐ xo
It seems everything you do is fabulous! Loved this Penny. ๐
Thank you LuAnn. So very much dear friend! ๐
LIKED.
Thank you! Very much! ๐
Excellent! It seems! Excellent!
Thank you, very sincerely!
love this, now I want part 3 ๐
For you Ivonne, I will be happy to write a part 3! ๐
I am looking forward to part three, thank you.
Ivonne
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Wow! This was great. Huge hug, Penny….Paula xx
Thank you Paula, big hugs to you dear friend! xxxx
Wow what a follow up… man your good… love it
Thank you bulldog. Very much appreciated by me!
This is a great follow up Penny. I really like it.
Thank you Alastair, sometimes the right words seem to find their way onto the page, the muse knows I guess, but she can be awfully playful sometimes! ๐
Yes they can be. The muse can be amusing or playfully … naughty. ๐
My muse tends to like the vampires and death LOL